| Course Syllabus
What does a Statement really tell us?
How to obtain a "pure" Statement.
The parts of a Statement
- People
- Objects
- Activities/Actions
- Locations
- Time
Important parts of speech
- Pronouns
- Missing pronouns
- The missing "I"
- Lower case "I"
Other important information typically found in statements
- The five pronominal ways to avoid commitment
- Characters
- Order of appearance
- Proper social introduction
- Basic rules for analysis
- The pronoun "we" in partnership and conspiracy
- Possessive pronouns
- Nouns (Language change reflects reality)
- Verbs and tense
The importance of the unimportant: unessential information
Missing information
Words that demonstrate a lack of commitment
Balance of the statement
Alibi statements
The one third rule
A quick look at perspective
Some basic rules for analysis
Total belief in the statement
Consistency of language
Reflection of reality
The statement should flow smoothly
The four ways to say the same sentence
1. Pronouns
2. People in the statement
3. Connection changes
4. Changes in tense
5. Objective times
6. Changes in usage
7. Inner completeness
8. out of sequence
The four most important points
a. Pronouns
b. Connections
c. Change in language.
d. Objective vs. subjective time
Analyzing the statement: Putting it all together
PRACTICE STATEMENTS
Case #1 - Street Robbery
Case #1 - Observations
Case #2 - Drive-by shooting
Case #2 - Observations
Case #3 - Theft from auto
Case #3 - Observations
Case #4 - Threatening letters
Case #4 - Observations
Case #5 - Missing Person
Case #5 - Observations
Analysis conclusion
Further explanation of this conclusion
A vs. The and Her vs. My
Observations on Articles and Possessive Pronouns
Bonus Information - just something to think about
The word "Both" when used with "We"
Using "Memory Links" to determine the validity of a statement.
The Writer's "Personal Perspective"
Statements / Class Email assignment
Case #1
Statements # 1 - 2
Statement # 1
Statement # 2
Case #2
Statement # 3
Case #3
Statements # 4 -5
Statement #4
Statement #5
Case #4
Statement #6
Part 1
Bonus Statement #6
Part 2
Statement #6
In Part 1 of Bonus Statement #6, the issues are as follows.
Statement Structure Percentages
The first trivial issue
The Main issue
The second trivial issue
Line Counts
Word Counts
Said vs. Told
Part 2 of Statement #6
Use of "WE" in a violent crime
Bonus Statement #7
Bonus Statement #7
Marked-up using our F.A.S.T. macro
Bonus Statement #8
Bonus Statement #8 Marked-Up
Bonus Statement #9 Said / Told
Statement #9 Said / Told Marked-up
Unintentional information
Unintentional information marked up
Bonus Statement #10 Wal-Mart Practicum
Conclusions
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